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Sorry about the grammar issues, I was typing fast, and on my iPad (which I'm using again) I'll fix the galaxy distance thing, and make Jimmy from a galaxy far away, settled by humans almost 300 years ago. This group had rebelled from the government at the time, and wanted to make their own private, self-sustaining colony very, very far away.
EDIT - All I did was make a new preamble to the backstory and changed a few things towards the end. I'm not going to fix the grammar issues because if I was going to, it would require me to retype the entire thing, and I don't want to do that. I hope you like it, and again, I can change my IGN to whatever you need
EDIT 2 - what if the "big ship" mentioned in the end of the lore is 1/2 of the dreadnought UFSF Asteria? That would be pretty cool to do. I could take off half of the ship and re-catalog it for this purpose. If you don't want half of a ship coming through, I can change my background to the ship never blowing up, but all crew removed except Jimmy, and the ship is now in Sol Remembrance.
EDIT - All I did was make a new preamble to the backstory and changed a few things towards the end. I'm not going to fix the grammar issues because if I was going to, it would require me to retype the entire thing, and I don't want to do that. I hope you like it, and again, I can change my IGN to whatever you need
EDIT 2 - what if the "big ship" mentioned in the end of the lore is 1/2 of the dreadnought UFSF Asteria? That would be pretty cool to do. I could take off half of the ship and re-catalog it for this purpose. If you don't want half of a ship coming through, I can change my background to the ship never blowing up, but all crew removed except Jimmy, and the ship is now in Sol Remembrance.
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