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    • Character name: Azrael Delorian Eridanus
    • Age: Bio-scans reveal an estimated age of 28; Subject does not know when he was born, or who he was born to.
    • Traits: Quiet and withdrawn; He is thoughtful and even cunning. He appears devoid of emotion at times. Interestingly, personality tests on record indicate a degree of ruthlessness.
    • Bio: Born in a remote star system on the outer rim of Solaris-controlled space, Azrael was found in an escape pod by a group of miners, who adopted the child. His parents were nowhere to be found, and genetic testing was unable to yield any data in this matter. Azrael\'s interesting name was, quite literally, an amalgamation of parts, as the miners named him after pieces of equipment and spacecraft strewn about the colony. As he grew, Azrael was taught the skills he needed to survive in the stark and rough environment that was Outer Solaris; operation of mining tools is second nature to him, and his aptitude in shipbuilding was revealed after the mining colony\'s head engineer taught him how to maintain the mining craft on the colony.

    Azrael finally moved away from the dusty and strip-mined planet he was raised on, but only because he managed to jump into a space-worthy mining craft before a marauding band of pirates masscred the men and women he had known as his family. His last memory of place where he was raised was a scarred planet lit by flames leaping from the colony on its surface. The incident plunged him into a state of emotional turbulence, as he tried to cope with the loss. Within his heart, a seed of vengeance took root.

    Azrael managed to find a sparsely populated planet, and established himself as an independent and successful miner. He had an unregistered family that consisted of him, his wife, and two children. Being a miner in the outer colonies of Solaris, Azrael didn\'t care much for government, preoccupied as he was with making a living. The most he saw of that distant entity that was the industrial empire of Solaris was the occasional government trading ship, with which he found himself performing repairs on and conducting deals quite often.

    After two years of practically unrecorded existence, Azrael set out in his personal spacecraft. He was attacked for unknown reasons by a raiding party and left to die, adrift in space.

    Additional notes from the Customs Officer: Subject appears emotionally impacted and confused. Behavior is typical of someone recovering from rescue operations and revivification. I know not whether this man comes with blood on his hands, or the burden of sorrow and loss on his back. Perhaps it is both.

    • Allegiance: Loosely affiliated with Solaris.
    • Do you plan to join the military? Possibly, in the future. Currently an independent miner.
    • Initial plans upon joining server: As an independent miner and shipbuilder, Azrael hopes to establish a homestead out of the intrusive reach of government and politics. He hopes to use his experience in shipbuilding, industry, and mining to create a self-sustaining colony for himself. If things go well, he might even turn a profit.
    • Other: Docendo Discimus. By teaching, we learn.
     
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    Here is the old version of the game for the server:

    http://files.star-made.org/build/starmade-build_20131030_000351.zip
     
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    Character name: Cavall

    Age: 36

    Traits: True Neutral, Technical Genius, Mechanical Genius, Design Guru.

    Longer Traits: Very little Combat Experience(Real or Simulated), Mediocre Pilot (Tends to stay on the ground designing ships), Gets Space-sick(In ships without artificial gravity). Burn scar on Right cheek/Neck area.

    Bio: Not much is known about Cavall, Nobody knows where he was born, in fact nobody even knew he existed, until he Invented an incredibly more efficient power core than seen in any current generation ships, he started building a buisness around technology, and his tech became standard.

    at the age of 31 he sold CaveTech in equal shares to both the Lunara and Solaris governments, and is now a freelance ship design/modification specialist.

    At the age of 32 he was abducted by pirates, and wasn\'t released until three years later, after he transferred his entire bank account over to the pirates, he has only recently recovered from the wounds the pirates inflicted, and now has a burn scar across his face from a plasma coil sabatoge incident.

    Allegiance: Himself.

    Do you plan to join the military? Nope.

    Initial plans upon joining server: Extensive Roleplaying, Ship/Subsystem Design.



    Other: Docendo Discimus .. I\'m in central american time zone, I play at different times, and I tend to stay unaligned.
     
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    • Character name: Andrew \"Clubs\" Carnegie
    • Age: 28
    • Traits: Most of his hair is blackish and scruffy. Quite fond of card games, Hence his title.
    • Bio: \"Born to the ancient Carnegie family of Solaris, Andrew was a quiet, withdrawn child far more comfortable with machinery than with his fellow human beings. At the Solaris Academy he developed a shy passion for metallurgy, a field he quickly excelled in. Now a graduate, he\'s slumming it up a bit, seeking to work in the large-scale production so he can have the practical experience he education couldn\'t provide him
    • Do you plan to join the military? Most likely not.
    • Initial plans upon joining server: Construct personal vessel. Learn the ways of mass manefacturing. Acquire an engineering occupation.
    • Other: docendo discimus
    • Allegiance: Solaris
     
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    It\'s your app, I cannot make that call, but I will say this, being a mass produced clone from an independant source far from Lunaris and Solaris would probably suit you better,

    died once at the hands of a ship thief, so my character is pretty much a clone at this point.

    and anyone can own cloning equipment, even Rendii owns a series of cloning equipment, though it is up to the employee\'s of Rendii if they want to face true death or not. you want your char to die you can easily RP it as they rescinded their agreement of cloning. as everyone clones by choice I would assume I doubt being made into a clone is the governments executive decision.
     
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    Your app is in order, but i do have a few nitpicks to point out.

    Your character has few to no flaws, and is extremely skilled (Known as a mary-sue in some places) Please, add some flaws/personality quirks! This is by no means an app rejection, simply a recomendation, but you are accepted, and i will notify Kelesith of such.
     
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    Thank you for your interest in Vivacitas!



    we do not allow copies of people places or things, your chars last name and Bio might be guilty of this, I would recommend at least changing his last name.

    we have no warp whatsoever in our canon
     
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    You are missing one key detail! Please reread the rules and edit your app accordingly!
     
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    I\'ve read everything.

    If you\'re referring to Allegiance, I didn\'t think I had to reference it when It\'s in the bio..

    But I \'spose.

    It\'ll be fixed in about a second.
     
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    Still not fixed! Try again! Read them very carefully! Its not your allegiance thats the problem. Particularlly you are missing two key words!
     
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    I have read this three times now, and I genuinely don\'t see it.

    Clearly I\'m missing something.

    Mind giving me a hint?
     
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    Thank you for your Interest and in Joining Vivacitas!

    I will Pm you the server details shortly.
     
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    Thank you for your interest and in Joining Vivacitas!

    Though I advise you change the first part of your name. it is already taken by Axel Ixalite.

    I will Pm you with the info shortly.
     
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    Thank you for your Interest in Vivacitas!

    Admiralkio here is right. you are missing something VITAL. you have either not read the rules and are skimming through them, read the rules word for word.
     
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    Woops! How did I skip the Taco man?

    Thank you for your interest and in Joining Vivacitas!

    I will Pm the details shortly.