It looks better from a forward or behind angle as opposed to a profile. Plus, the ends of the bridge actually go right inside the main ship - they are the main point of entry to the bridge and out of it. It's also the path to get from the front of the ship to the back.Bridgeception!
Also, I think they should look less pasted on, and more of a connected, sturdy structure. After all, it's the vital part of your ship.
I do see it all coming together nicely
I might go ahead and add some pillars or something similar to give it more of an attached look though.