Right I seen a few others make the same mistake that you made, its pretty major and will get you denied. Figure that I should point this out to someone at least once on here. This sever is a roleplaying one, thus the RP part in the name, I\'m sure you know what it is, if not just ask.
You want your application to explain a few things, first is your character\'s name. This is not your username per say, while it could be minus any numbers. My username is Damiann47, but I like to use the name Daris Breaker for any characters I make for RP type stuff. Second you want to give your character a personality, for this just simple words do, like loyal, or distrustful all you need to do is give a broad statment on how your character acts. I suggest you try to make a character similar to yourself, makes it easier to play since you generally act like yourself.
The third and most important part is your character\'s bio, this is where you tell us what your character\'s history is, any faimily, the smaller details like that. ALWAYS READ THE LORE, your character needs to fit in the world that the creator made, if you make a futuristic cyborg in a fantasy setting you will be rejected. In this case there is a millitary organization called Eternia, they pretty much took over most parts of known space. You the player are a prisoner on a ship called the Hail. Your bio in the case of this server needs to lead up to how you got imprisioned in the first place, feel free to get creative with this.
Everything else is just how it is, explain what your plans are on the sever simple as that. One last thing often times an application requires you to put something in it to prove that you read the rules, like putting the word \"Danger\" in the other section of the application, go back and make sure you read the rules.
