Putting up a first ship for download is always a brave step. Here is some constructive criticism.
Aesthetics:
- Overall composition would place this ship in the flying brick category. Don’t worry, most of us start out that way
- Armor and glass shapes have very low to no details.
- There is very little to no material changes used. Most of it just consist of advanced hull
- There is no clear division in ship sections. What sections are dedicated to what purpose?
- The cockpit area overs a spectacular view of space.
- Bleu highlight can add a lot to a ship. The implementation could use some improvements however.
Systems:
- This ship has only one weapon system. The first shot better kill your target or you are toast. With multiple targets this gets even worse.
- The power system is not able to handle all the power requirements.
- A lot of wasted space for far too large a system for a ship this size.
- No turrets are implemented. AMS defence would be a must
- The advanced hull makes this a though little ship but it also makes it very slow.
- No chambers are used within this build.
Purpose/Role:
- This ship is advertised as a combat and role play build. The roleplay part lags behind unfortunately.
- The interior space lacks detail and elements that tells players what the purpose of a room is.
- There is a lack of variety in room division.
The above points are things you can think about or disregard as you wish.
Overall it is a good first attempt but it’s clear that this is a beginner build. Don’t be discouraged and keep on building. You will learn form others and from yourself.
