HMS Cloudsdale Blitz - Battlecruiser class ship

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    This is my first ship, so constructive criticism would be appreciated. There will be 5 turrents added in the future.

    Pictures: http://imgur.com/a/K1JKj#0



    Stats

    Mass: 1109.4

    Thrust: 1380.4

    Power Recharge Rate: 47158.9 e/sec

    Power Capacity: 59825.2

    Shield Capacity: 76371

    Shield Recharge Rate: 2575 s/sec

    Shield Recharge Delay: 1 sec



    Weapons

    25 40 block d1000 missile pods*

    25 40 block AMC's*

    4 Medium SS-DD missile pods



    *RainBOOM Cannon
     
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    You\'ve created a fairly solid first ship, with an admirable interior. The hole you punched through the planet was proof enough of that. However, there may be a few things you want to fix. Number one, and I cant stress this enough, make it blend a bit better. Your edges are a a bit blocky, and the entire thing looks just a tad too smooth for a block based game. Stretch the lights all the way down the sides, to really enhance that rainbow decal you have going on. I\'d personally make the ship less wide, or longer, in order to make the gun barrel stand out. It\'s an exemplary first effort, And I hope to see more out of you! We might be able to combine efforst. See the Royal Equestrian Shipyards.
     
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    Thank you for the the tips. I will keep them in mind when I build my Titan, the HMS Harmony.