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Fantastic!!!

The \"Fantasticc\" bit I get, but not the rest.

I like them. Are you planning on making more?

Since when is a replica of a ship \"Original\"?

Ugh. Lol, nice job guys. I\'ve never built a station before, only ships, although I did try a orbital defense station thingamajig, whihc was built off of a core so I could save it and buy it more easily. It failed.

Depends on how the circles are whether they look better or not with wedges, I believe. In a sphere, or semi doe as this is, it makes it look like layers of flat circles as opposed to a circle which is rounded across it\'s width. So in this case, no wedges is probably better. If it was me, I...

But it\'s not hard to see why it went big fast :)

I think this all the stuff you notice subconciously - the things that make the story deeper, but you aren\'t quite sure why. Some of those things you only notice after reading a second time, or even third or fourth.

is that they are clichés for a reason. Everyone loves them, and that\'s why they are used. But when they get overused, you just think \"He stole Tolkien\'s character!!!\" or whatever, even though it quite possibly wasn\'t Tolkien\'s to start with. Clichés. however, aren\'t necessarily a good...

I think the title is a metaphor. \"A Galaxy Burning\", as in, everything is burning away. Correcct me if I\'m wrong.

What? Lol. That was rather funny to read through, although I\'m still not entirely sure of the point you were trying to make.

Me too.

I just know that you, Obi, have a rather bad reputation on here. So all I\'m gonna say is there are two sides to every story.

Congratulations too all those receiving promotions! Especially to Cybertooth! And to you Nature, for running such a fantastic faction! :)

DFN has 67.

A great improvement on the first part. I found I could make a lot more sense of it without having to stop and think, and then re-read several times. I understood first time. Which really, is exactly what you are looking for. Nice job :)

That was a long name. IWannaBeTheVeryBestLikeNoOneEverWasToCatchThemIsMyRealTestToTrainThemISMyCausIWillTravelAcrossTheLandSearchingFarAndWideThesePokemonToUnderstandThePowerThatsInsidePokemonGottaCatchEmItsYouAndMEIKnowItsMyDestinyPokemonOoohYourMyBestFriendInAWorldWeMustDefend ^^ lol

They almost look they are living. It\'s really unique. and I haven\'t seen anything like it. I\'ll agree with FlyingDebris in saying it is bordering on too much ribbing, but you pull it off well. It doesn\'t look too over the top.

I watched a minute, and was already both cringing and laughing. I don\'t have enough time to waatch all 30 minutes at the moment, but I probably will at some point.

I like it. The descrition is good, as is the tension and general style. I didd find some things a bit confusing, however. It might just be that I\'m tired, but it wsn\'t until about halfway that I realised what group the Lazarus were, and well into the second half that I figured out the Main...