TTF Fortitude Class Corvette 2019-09-12
- Author Tilbo
- Creation date
- The Boiling Tea-pot
- 5.00 star(s)
- Version: 2019-09-12
DA Da dats nice.
T
Tilbo
Thank you
- klawxx
- 4.00 star(s)
- Version: 2019-09-12
The hull design is very interesting, reminds me a lot of the Cylon Resurrection ship (https://en.battlestarwikiclone.org/wiki/File:Resurrection_Ship.jpg) from Battlestar Galactica. It has a lot of potential.
The interior consists mainly of brightly illuminated blue and pink standard armor. Feels very empty and need a lot of work. You should use all the empty space for more systems (PVP) or fill that with rooms and decoration (Roleplay).
Main pointers for interior:
Try removing some light sources. Shadows can be a powerful immersion tool. You should do some testing and learn to use it.
A) If you want an alien feel, try using wood, and terrain blocks and some of the available plants as interior decoration. A few decorative terminals and cables/struts here and there can give a organic/machine - cyborg feel.
B) If you want a more human feel, add beds, medbay, seats and tables. Computer workstations with chairs and some dedicated compartments. Use lots of girdles and basic hulls for floor and wall patterns.
Other points are:
1) Why two identically placed cams on the observation tower up above? One could be switched with a BOBBY A.I. Module to allow the ship to be used by NPC factions.
2) The docking port, present on both sides lack the Rail and Docker modules to be compatible with the USD model. This could be asily fixed.
A very nice build for someone new to starmade that could be easily improved to become one above average alien ship.
Thanks for sharing your creation with us.
Cheers,
- Klawxx.
The interior consists mainly of brightly illuminated blue and pink standard armor. Feels very empty and need a lot of work. You should use all the empty space for more systems (PVP) or fill that with rooms and decoration (Roleplay).
Main pointers for interior:
Try removing some light sources. Shadows can be a powerful immersion tool. You should do some testing and learn to use it.
A) If you want an alien feel, try using wood, and terrain blocks and some of the available plants as interior decoration. A few decorative terminals and cables/struts here and there can give a organic/machine - cyborg feel.
B) If you want a more human feel, add beds, medbay, seats and tables. Computer workstations with chairs and some dedicated compartments. Use lots of girdles and basic hulls for floor and wall patterns.
Other points are:
1) Why two identically placed cams on the observation tower up above? One could be switched with a BOBBY A.I. Module to allow the ship to be used by NPC factions.
2) The docking port, present on both sides lack the Rail and Docker modules to be compatible with the USD model. This could be asily fixed.
A very nice build for someone new to starmade that could be easily improved to become one above average alien ship.
Thanks for sharing your creation with us.
Cheers,
- Klawxx.
T
Tilbo
Thank you for your review! I'm actually an old hand making a return and have a lot of things to work on!
I will most certainly take your ideas on board and see what I can work out in the vessel.
The docking port part I'm slightly confused about, because I never put any docking ports onto this ship?
I also never thought about putting a Bobby in there (once again, making a LONG time comeback here aha) and I thought it would be pleasing to be able to switch between the two (personally I prefer the left)
Once again, thank you!
I will most certainly take your ideas on board and see what I can work out in the vessel.
The docking port part I'm slightly confused about, because I never put any docking ports onto this ship?
I also never thought about putting a Bobby in there (once again, making a LONG time comeback here aha) and I thought it would be pleasing to be able to switch between the two (personally I prefer the left)
Once again, thank you!